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Monday 29 October 2012

bush walk

Intro.
Once upon too kids called Josh and Nick and the teacher miss Alan went up the manetin on a trip .They were going for a pink neck and for a walk up in the bush.Then they kept on walking.


Problem.
After they got up the manetin Nicki  had cut her leg. Josh went to get the teacher when Josh got miss Alan miss alan went to get a plaster. When miss Alan got there was no more plasters left. Miss Alan was looking for something to rap it up with.

Action.
When the bus arrived at the manetin miss Alan ran and said “do you have any plasters” and the bus driver  said “yes I have two more left”. When the bus driver gave the plaster to miss Alan miss gave the plaster to Josh.

How it is solved.
Josh went to go to Nicki when Josh gave the plaster to Nicki put on her leg.When Josh gave the plaster to Nicki was feeling happy when Josh gave the plaster. After Nicki said “that she felt happy”.   

Friday 26 October 2012

Point England school

After school Broneq and Keis went to the Pt England Shops and they both had 10 dollars and they went to get some food for them. When they got to the shops they had got two lollies when they got the lollies they both had nine dollars left.

When they got outside the shop got redded the man how redded the shop he had a gun the gun had pink love hearts on it. When he got inside he said put your hand’s up our get out side. When the shop Keeper’s got outside the man put some food into his bag and filled it up to the top.




When the man started to run the owens went to get the police when the police came they were looking for him. He was going to the beach when he got to the beach he opened the beach. After he opened the bag at the beach the police found him and took him to jail.